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Samurai Slayer Part 5

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After they ran and walked for a few hours, they both arrived in the next town. The town was small and full of kind people. As Kokoa looked at all the kind people in the town, she then started to tear.

Kio looked at her and asked, "Hey, what the heck are you crying for? We just got a free place to stay."

She wiped the tears from her eyes and looked at him for a couple of seconds. She then smiled at him. As he let his guard down, she smacked him as hard as she could and knocked him down on his butt. She walked away while she left him in question, and lying on the ground with a red stinging hand mark on his face. After she smacked him, Kokoa started to walk around town remembering things from her village. She remembered how she went to her favorite restaurant every day for lunch. Another thing she remembered while she looked at some kids playing around, was that she missed her friends and everyone from her old village. As she began to tear while she waved and said 'hello' to all the people who greeted her. She then walked into a small restaurant, like she used to eat at in her old village. She got the thing she normally got when she had lunch. She started to smile while her soul filled with happiness and joy. The thrill went though her body and gave her peace at mind. She walked out after eating her food and she started to feel a little woozy. Her vision started to blur and black out. She fell over right in front of the restaurant on her face.

On the other side of town, Kio, after he got bitch slapped by Kokowa, went back to the Dojo, where both Kokoa and him were staying. He went to see the students train in Kendo.

The Sensei of the dojo came up to him and asked, "If you don't mind, would you like to have a match with my best student? He is a little eager for a good opponent to test his skills."

He looked up and said, "Sure... why not..."

Kio got up slowly and grabbed a boken and slid it into his hand like if there was a sheath there. Then, he gave respect to his sparing partner by bowing to him. Right after he raised from the bow the kid followed him in the rise. Kio then went right into the basic defense stance of a swordsman, and the kid followed him like a point five second delayed mirror. Kio waited for the kid to attack. As the kid stood there and stared at him, he started to shake nervously with fear hoping not to get injured by Kio’s fury. Then in a split sec the Kid charged! And he screamed with his sword above his head. Kio just swiped his sword down and the kid got off balance, and it looked like he was about to fall. Kio looked to the Sensei of the dojo

“Sir, was he really the best here?” Then he sighed

The Sensei started to chuckle a bit, “You should really not judge on what you see, but the thing that is most important for you to look at my pupil now.”

Kio looked on the ground where the kid would have fallen, surprisingly, there was no one there and he looked from side to side.

Sensei smiled at him, “Never judge people ‘til you know their skill. Oh, and look behind you.”

He looked behind himself with wide eyes, then as soon as possible, he swung his sword up to block the kid’s attack, and he pushed the kid away.

Kio thought 'Shit What the hell is this kid!? He did fall, but how did he get around me without making a noise? I didn’t even here him run when I blocked his attack!! Man… Then only way I can beat this kid is I’m going to need to keep an eye on him'

Kio charged and went as fast as he could, and bolted in back of the kid, going for a slice to his back. The kid blocked his attack without turning around. After pushing the sword away and pulling it up and forward a little, he thrust down and used the sword as a pole, flipping Kio over, and slicing down his back.

The Sensei chuckled again, “That’s enough for today. Please bow to each other.” He then looked at Kio said, “My students aren’t as bad as you think. If you want to know why you heard nothing I will be very willing to tell and teach you. I just request for you to stay here a mere five days that’s all.” He looked at the Sensei with confidence.

He said to him, “I’ll do my best… and I’ll only take two and a half days.”
Hello every1 this is the chapter when there is no Errors (Hopefully) i got My good friend star to check it ove for me and she said it good! soo i hope u like this chapter its the begining of the whole Story which leads to THE END *hint hint* xP but i hope you like this chapter
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Little-J-007's avatar
'After she smacked him, Kokoa started to walk around town' you don't need that part 'cause you already said that she walked away...
You could replace by : 'As she looked through the busy city, she started remembering...

As she began to tear while she waved and said 'hello' to all the people who greeted ''her.'' She then walked into a small
Put a coma instead of the point...
... who greeted her, she then walked....

Besides that it's great ^^